Writing week 6 JOY

Hello bloggers, today I will be sharing my writing on the short film called JOY. Joy is about a dog, the dog was going fishing with his owner. but then a Heron a bird comes over and eats the bait!
here is my learning goal for the week: Ensure that most writing is grammatically correct.
here is my work.
also we have chunks of the story so I did not write the hole story.

Joy was proud as a baby-lion. He just saved the slithery, squirting, screaming bait, because Gary needed the bait to fish. But Joy saw that Heron was just trying to get food for her baby’s. Herons babies hated fish so much that they sat down and they did not even want to go close to the fish. 

have you ever been fishing?

My comic on blog comments!

Hello bloggers, today I will be showing you my blog comment comic. I did this comic for cyber smart lesson 1.
here is my comic!

hopefully you liked the comic.

have you ever been on make beliefs comix?

Matariki star on tinkercad

Good morning bloggers, today I will be sharing with you my star that I made on tinkercad!
tinkercad is a app where you make 3d art. after you finished your art you can then print it on the 3d printer!
we had to make a star and a waka from scratch.
here is my work!

Have you ever used tinkercad to make something 3d?

week 11 writing, seal pup!

Hello bloggers, today I will be sharing with you my week 11 seal pup work! our amazing principal Mrs Earl came into our hub and give us a idea for writing. In our writing we had to have a adverbial phrase, repetition and a rhetorical question. After I did my writing I made my writing into a wevideo!
Here is my learning goal for the week! (Use a range of written features to engage the audience)

here is my work!

As the sky filled with brightness, the seal pup was waking up! His cute face was coming out of the fresh snow fall. The seal pup was alone. He keeps on saying I have a dream. I have a dream that someday I will see my mother again. I have a dream that someday I will be in the gigantic city of New York. I have a dream that I will have a friend. The seal pup keeped on wriggling to the ocean. to hopefully find someone that will help him.

Thanks for reading.
  Do you think he will survive?

Public and private, what should I not share?

Hello bloggers, today i will be sharing my private and public task for cyber smart. I had to put things into a private an public box and then say why you put it in public or private!
here is my work!

Do you put private things on the internet?

Ratios are fun!

Hello bloggers, today I will be sharing my work about ratios! ratios are when you compare two things for example you have 10 apples and you have 5 lemons, the ratio for that would be 10:5.

this is my learning goal for the week!

Find a fraction of a number by trial and improvement by using addition facts

Here is my work.

have you ever done ratios? did you like doing them?

Narrative writing!

Hello blogger, today I will be sharing my narrative writing for this week! We had to make a piece of writing about four pictures. We got the pictures from pobble365, our work also had to be between
250 and 300 words.
here is my learning goal for the week! (Use a range of  written features to engage the audience)
here is my work!

The stalker
Chapter 1. The video

On sunny bright morning John and Bob where having a look at there cameras outside there house. They where having a look if anyone was walking or doing something in the night. They looked on there cameras for a bit and they where about to get off but then they saw a strange figure coming towards there house and having a look in the windows and knocking on the door. Bob and John where scared but at the same time they wanted to find out who the stalker was!

Chapter 2. the wait

John and Bob waited for night to see if the stalker would come agian. They waited for stalker to come to there house, it was like they wanted to be stalked! They were in there attic waiting for the stalker to come, John was looking out the window and Bob was having a look around. He found a weird mirror in the room so he went to touch it. When Bob touched it his finger went trhough it. Bob Screamed ahhhhhh, John yelled back to him “what happened? Bob said worriedly my finger went into this mirror.

Chapter 3. The plan

 John whispered “no way we could put this mirror over the stalker and it might take him into a magical world! Good Idea whispered Bob. They stayed in the attic for a long time untill a head poped around the corner of the house, John yelled “Bob come and have a look I think I found the stalker!” They went outside with the mirror and went to were they saw the stalker. They went around the corner and there he was they put the mirror over his head and down his body and then he was gone!
Bob and John had no problems with stalkers ever again!

Have you ever been stalked?