Narrative writing!

Hello blogger, today I will be sharing my narrative writing for this week! We had to make a piece of writing about four pictures. We got the pictures from pobble365, our work also had to be between
250 and 300 words.
here is my learning goal for the week! (Use a range of  written features to engage the audience)
here is my work!

The stalker
Chapter 1. The video

On sunny bright morning John and Bob where having a look at there cameras outside there house. They where having a look if anyone was walking or doing something in the night. They looked on there cameras for a bit and they where about to get off but then they saw a strange figure coming towards there house and having a look in the windows and knocking on the door. Bob and John where scared but at the same time they wanted to find out who the stalker was!

Chapter 2. the wait

John and Bob waited for night to see if the stalker would come agian. They waited for stalker to come to there house, it was like they wanted to be stalked! They were in there attic waiting for the stalker to come, John was looking out the window and Bob was having a look around. He found a weird mirror in the room so he went to touch it. When Bob touched it his finger went trhough it. Bob Screamed ahhhhhh, John yelled back to him “what happened? Bob said worriedly my finger went into this mirror.

Chapter 3. The plan

 John whispered “no way we could put this mirror over the stalker and it might take him into a magical world! Good Idea whispered Bob. They stayed in the attic for a long time untill a head poped around the corner of the house, John yelled “Bob come and have a look I think I found the stalker!” They went outside with the mirror and went to were they saw the stalker. They went around the corner and there he was they put the mirror over his head and down his body and then he was gone!
Bob and John had no problems with stalkers ever again!

Have you ever been stalked?