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Wednesday, April 8, 2020

The wizard

It was a dark and stormy night the wind was strong and it was raining hard. there was a castle at the top of a large hill there a wizard lived. that night the wizard was making a potion that would turn him invisable so then he could stell the big dimond from the muesuem. he put lots of diffent things into his potion like sandwich and bread sticks. the next day the wizard was prefecting his potion and trying it to see if it actully  worked. that nigh the wizard was getting ready and packing his stuff into a bag so he could take it to the meuseum but then a boy named Zac came up to his window and sared at his potion and the book for spells and stuff. Zac went up to the door and kcocked untill the wizard came and anseared the door. Zac said to him "Wow you have a lot of books here can I please read one?" no said the wizard and get out. so Zac left the house but still watched him pack his things and go to the mueseum. Zac followed him and when he saw that he was going in Zac called for help. he yelled batman batman there is someone trying to stell somthing at the meuseum batman came out of his cav and sprinted to the meuseum to stop the wizard. mean while at he meuseum the wisard was cheacking if anyone was around so he wold not get cought stelling the dimond. and then outof nowhere batman came and spare tackled him to the ground and took him to jail. after that no one tried to take the dimond.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zac,
    Your story reminds me a bit of George's Marvellous Medicine, he put lots of interesting things into his concoction. I like how you have included some speech marks but remember that capital letters follow full stops. Maybe do a bit more editing before publishing.
    Have you gone onto any of those virtual museum sites in the Whanau slide activities?
    Look forward to reading your next blog.
    Mrs Ferguson

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