here is my learning goal for the week: Ensure that most writing is grammatically correct.
here is my work.
also we have chunks of the story so I did not write the hole story.
Joy was proud as a baby-lion. He just saved the slithery, squirting, screaming bait, because Gary needed the bait to fish. But Joy saw that Heron was just trying to get food for her baby’s. Herons babies hated fish so much that they sat down and they did not even want to go close to the fish.
have you ever been fishing?
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