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Thursday, June 25, 2020

week 11 writing, seal pup!

Hello bloggers, today I will be sharing with you my week 11 seal pup work! our amazing principal Mrs Earl came into our hub and give us a idea for writing. In our writing we had to have a adverbial phrase, repetition and a rhetorical question. After I did my writing I made my writing into a wevideo!
Here is my learning goal for the week! (Use a range of written features to engage the audience)
here is my work!

As the sky filled with brightness, the seal pup was waking up! His cute face was coming out of the fresh snow fall. The seal pup was alone. He keeps on saying I have a dream. I have a dream that someday I will see my mother again. I have a dream that someday I will be in the gigantic city of New York. I have a dream that I will have a friend. The seal pup keeped on wriggling to the ocean. to hopefully find someone that will help him.

Thanks for reading.
  Do you think he will survive?



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